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Nov. 8th, 2021 09:35 am

Idol Minor+ Prompt 2

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Idol Minor +
Prompt 2
Roopkund


Lighting on bleached bone
Ruffling feathers for warmth
Head tucked under wing

Who summoned from hell?
What lost soul out of boredom
Called the serpent forth?

Blood soaked feather blows
Across the barren graveyard
Over sun-bleached bones
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Date: 2021-11-08 06:30 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] jake67jake
Nice imagery! Thanks for writing.
Date: 2021-11-08 07:14 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] murielle
Thank you! :-)
Date: 2021-11-09 03:26 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] bleodswean
Poetry, M! Very visual and chilling! I love the middle stanza with the questioning!
Date: 2021-11-09 04:32 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] murielle
Thank you, E! I love that you "get" me. ;-)
Date: 2021-11-09 09:30 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] erulissedances
Wow - so visual, so visceral. Loved it!

- Erulisse (one L)
Date: 2021-11-09 11:36 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] murielle
Thank you so much! I really found this prompt challenging and actually found some notes from years ago for a poem and borrowed some images from my past self. ;-)
Date: 2021-11-12 01:07 am (UTC)

From: [personal profile] dsrmousey
Poetry! A little dark, a little shivery! Good work M!

*I'll be jumping in soon!
Date: 2021-11-12 01:46 am (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] murielle
Thank you so much, my dear!

Yay! I can't wait! <3
Date: 2021-11-15 03:29 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic
I really liked this - it definitely asks for repeated readings, but the picture is sharply clear in my mind from the get-go. Sometimes the simplest things hide so much under their surface, like Roopkund, like this poem. Good work :)
Date: 2021-11-15 05:23 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] murielle
Thank you so much, S. That means a lot to me. Sometimes images are all I get. :-)
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